I see what you mean in No.

I see what you mean in No. 10 -- but it didn't work.

In any sentence, the end is a strong point. In any list of 10, No. 10 is a strong point. If No. 10 is weak, or fizzles . . .

So rewrite No. 10.

Yeah, I'm a CLI type. I'm also an editor; that's how I know what's wrong with No. 10.

Submitted by Wendell Cochran (not verified) on Thu, 03/27/2008 - 15:01.

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